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Been notoriously bad at keeping up on posting this here, recommend checking the homepage, we're nearing 60 pages with August's update.

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I find it a little difficult at understanding "the warhog's" (Forgot his name, sorry) personality. To me it has so far seemed that he was a weak person, that had a hard time standing up for himself, relied much on others, and doing what was morally right, but here he suddenly goes all alone out in front of those horseriders, full of courage and determination, doing what others don't have the guts to do - to me that seems to be pretty much the opposite of what I've seen so far :l
Care to clear out my confusion? :)

Also, I'd recommend you to start using boxes with an objective and informative narrator's text, like in the typical Donald Duck comics. This would help clear out confusion, and honestly I'm still pretty much confused by a lot of things. Perhaps the main-reason is because of your choice of switching between different persons and places for almost every page, so that we will have to focus on several sub-plots at a time, instead of one big.

These are of course only suggestions, a small advice that I wrote, wanting to help you out being the only intention. I like your drawings and I'd love to continue reading this, so keep up the good work! :)