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This comic is rated PG13, for depiction of violence, adult language and adult themes.
Updates happen on the 1st, until the 4th of each month. With bonus pages updated on the 5th and 6th from time to time.
Asis is a webcomic set in a fantasy world ravaged by the lingering effects of a god killed by the very race he created. Presented with even a glimmer of hope to restore the world, and raise Asis once again, some will fight to bring back this fallen god, others will do anything to prevent his return.
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`anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sorry for that big critique there, here's the stuff I like.
Your art! I love it, it's really... flow-y (For lack of a better word.
Your art looks very different from what usually see -I like that very much. It's unique and very soft (As I've said several times already but that's because I like it). I shall go read your comic now.
Maybe pushing the prologue copy up so that it's under the main title, making it smaller so that it doesn't fight with the title, and fiddling with its placement so that it's not centered, but looks balanced when compared with where the heads and halos of the characters are -- and then adding a 'by Skulldog' where the prologue currently is would make it feel more natural. I've got no problem with the picture, itself -- it's lovely! -- save for maybe knees being very close to the edges of the image. The font and placement do seem to be underacknowledged compared to what you have done with the illustration.
I hope that helps and doesn't come across as being annoying! The comic is looking pretty awesome so far.
I'm going to play with some variations for the title/header placement and size. Aside from lettering comics, my typographical skills are about zero, so it's been mostly me going 'These colors looks good, we'll go with this..'.
Thanks for the insight!